Inkitt
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Great

"Twisted and cute odd combination but it worked very well I liked it"

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Predictable

"Well, whomever edited this did not do a very good job as there were several pages that repeated the first few sentences twice. There are also instances where a word is missing. Overall, the story is predictable and hardly engaging and the many errors just make it worse."

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To mixed up

"The book started out decent, but then went terrible really fast. The ending was extremely predictable, and the spelling was horrendous. The last few chapters were very repetitive. The whole plot itself was a giant mess. "

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