The Broken by Lucia:P at Inkitt
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The Broken

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Summary

Max ends up finding herself reliving her childhood trauma. She ends up finding someone who could destroy or save her but not without the cost of finishing what she started many years ago a war she was born into and created. will she be able to fix what she started or will it slowly destroy her.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Start

All I could see was blood, the red that covered all the grass you could see for miles.I could feel the icy cold winds brushing by my cold plump cheeks. The screams of children and the screams of grown men and woman the screams rang in my head like a siren. The life slowly draining from the warriors one by one. There I was a little girl who tried to see the light. Then in a moment I noticed that there was no point. I wasn't gonna make it out alive so why the hell should I live a lie.I watched from a distance as everyone just killed each other ruthlessly and mercilessly I observed it all, so carefully. I watched people who were only Sixteen or younger just get torn apart like rag dolls. I saw how manipulated and cold this world was. How we killed other people like they were mere ants. The one thing I noticed was they all hesitated for a split second before killing. It was only natural you were about to send them to death and never to be seen again. I thought about this for a long time quiet I watched. I think this was when I finally noticed I was slowly going insane.


Here I am nineteen now still with the rhythms of those screams replaying in my head as I look into a pond. In the reflection there's a girl with sharp eyes that could almost pierce through your soul. and they were blue like the brightst sky but as dangerous of the unforgiving seas. I had red hair asred as hell fire that went down to my shoulders . I sit there staring at myself in the pond for a while. Just looking at myself quietly thinking about that day but I hated thinking about my past cause it was so cold, dark and worthless. I hear a small movement in the bushes and I automatically pop up looking around slowly trying to identify what it is.

"What the hell was that." I say to myself quietly as i keep looking around ready to pounce.

As a automatic reaction I transformed into my half form to try to smell out what the hell it was. I sniffed in the air a few times to see what it was then I caught in the smell of flesh and something or someone. Someone was watching me from those bushes I snarled to give them the vibe they weren't welcome here. As I keep snarling I heard a bone chilling howl that went down my spine and gave me the shivers. There's only one thing that can howl like that and that would be alpha.

"hmm wasn't expecting to see a alpha out here." I say sarcastically waiting for them to come out of the bushes

"I wasn't excepting to see a loner like you out in my woods ether". I hear someone say in a deeper masculine voice. I see a Man pop out of the bush he is a lot taller then me and has purple eyes. His eyes seem warmer and sweet but also chilling like they wouldnt hesitate to kill at the same time. He has brown hair and wide shoulders and looks a little older then me.

"Your woods." I say looking at him as I start putting the pieces together.

"Yea mine are you surprised pup." he says with a sicking smirk on his face.

Hes the alpha of which is one of the most feared pacts ever known I think to myself I thought he would be more intimidating as he keeps looking me up and down observing me I do the same to him. I take in every little detail the little scar next to his eye and how sharp his teeth are when he smirks. I see his sharp cheek bones and tan skin color. how he was also a little nervous cause he taps his hand against his side a little. He knew who I was and I knew him.

"Don't call me that." I say sternly as he paces around me I try not to be intimidated by him.

but it is kind of hard because we would be pretty even in a fight if all the talk about him I heard was true. as he keeps moving i snarl at him telling him to stop. He does.

"You know how many people want you dead." he says with serious kind of scary look

"Not enough yet." I smile with the smile of insanity like I wasn't scared at all.

"I pictured you different I thought you would be really scary but you seem more like a little lost pup to me"He says with a smile he says a little surprised.

I get the sense of other wolves approaching as I sniff out the air I can tell he knows I know there there.

"You sneaky bastard." I say as I hear them approaching.

I start preparing to fight my left eye starts to glow a bright red and change color the fur start to stand up on my neck as I flash him my teeth.

"so your a feisty one aren't you." he says as he looks at me

it doesn't look like hes gonna fight he is hiding something so I stay in my position. I get ready to dart off if his pack moves anymore.

"Hey lone wolf ill make you a deal" he says.





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