LOVE, LOST AND FOUND

"An interesting story from the beginning. The start really caught my attention and the first chapter made me want to continue on with the story. However, there is room for improvement in the second and third chapters as it concerns the grammar and punctuation. There are also a few gaps in the story as well which constricts the flow a reader appreciates when reading, but a good plot overall as I can see a wonderful story coming out of this with just a bit of revision and continuation:)"