The Guide

"I like how you have a wide range of vocabulary words/verbs. Your plot flows very well. As someone who does not read "fantasy" novels, this story really intrigued me. You gave enough details to where I could fill it in, but a way to make it better would be providing more imagery for the setting. Thank you so much for reviewing my book, I plan to continue following your story and I hope you do the same! If you want to review for review in the future, just let me know."