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Pain

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Summary

Sadness and despair are in everyone's lives. Some choose to stay away from it, and some embrace it. (Warning: Mentions of Suicide and depression.)

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Heart in sorrow

Mind in vain

No one listens,

when i'm in pain


Hide the misery

Hide the rage

The smiles works..

just waiting to fade


Hide the cuts

and Hide the scars

I ran outside,

and jump into my car


Off the ledge,

That's where I drived.

Now everyone knows,

That I have died.


Hearts in sorrow,

Minds in vain.

Now everyone knows,

I was screaming in pain.
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that's so good .....i really like the way you put ' pain ' and rythem in your poetry ...just love it .🪷🫶

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