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Little Boy

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Summary

Every child suffers, Some more than others. The voices in their heads talk to them, Some ignore it and some listen. This little boy listened to the demons in his head.and they betrayed him. (Warning: Mentions of death and murder. As well as sinning and the underworld.).

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Little Boy,

Crying so loud.

As his family assends,

straight into the clouds.


The fire of rage,

The ashes of fury.

Now all the boy feels

is the suffocation of misery


The boy with no home,

Now lives on the streets.

Begging for help,

Or just something to eat.


In the cold of winter,

The boy ascends as well.

But not to heaven, No.

He goes straight to hell.


Sinner at birth, now sinner at rest.

starting the fire that swept all away.

The demons told him start the war,

But now he feels they had led him astray.


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