Trouvaille

"It was good. Here's why: *The pace is decent *The plot flows well *Keeps the reader interested It can improve. Here's why: If you were meeting someone for the first time, spilling your entire life story wouldn't be the most logical course of action. Putting myself in Katie's shoes, hearing someone baring the nooks and crannies of their soul to me after only knowing them for a few minutes would feel a little overwhelming. Instead, let her find things out bit by bit."