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Depressed

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Summary

Never listen to the demons in your head. They will continue to scream until you give in. They will never stop if you keep encouraging them. Not even if you give your own life. (Warning: Depression and Suicide. mentioning of the underworld)

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

No longer can the scars heal

No longer can the dying stop

The the suffocated feeling of lost

Can no longer be fought

The shining of the blood

Running down my arms

No one will know

If I hide the harm

Fear and rage

Sorrow and incapable

Hopeless and depressed

Misery is inescapable

The screaming of death

Will not silent

The demons who push me

Are all tyrant

They continue

To break me down

Making me do the job

My hope for life,

unable to be found

Darkness consumes

All around me

And my life

Was the only fee

The world so cold

Will finally be left behind

The people who live,

Why were they never kind?

Now i’m gone

And they gather around

Regretting their mistakes

As my body was found.

The scars heal

My dying has not

As I burn in the flames of hell

And am left to rot.

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I just loved everything about it I mean a poem about suicide that I understand and as I understand it it describes my life

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