The Elements

Stacy

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Elements

"I loved everything about this book. The story line is amazing. I love the creativity. The powers the characters were given. It's all good and I love it. The grammar wasn't that good but it was readable and the use of vulgar language was too much but apart from that the book was okay and magnificent. I didn't like how Shadow ended up being alone and How black became the leader. That's all but this book is amazing "

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Rgood422

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Needs lots of spelling edits…

"The book flows… however the spelling and grammar needs a lot of edits… even with those issues I get true gist of the plot and story line…."

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Cree

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The elements

"I love this storyline, this was a really good concept to come up with. I applaud the hell out of you ❤️❤️❤️"

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The Elements

"Great book to read with an amazing story line but its like it was written by a 10 year old with pronounciation problems. Anyways its a good book, well done!!"

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Vivian

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The elementer

"I like the book and the plot"

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Kirsty

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Needs work

"Great story and overall plot! The book needs quite a few grammar fixes, and no one says the F bomb that much, perhaps using more than the one cuss word a dozzen times each chapter would help the overall story line. It makes ake the characters seem less like bad asses and more like bully's. Can't blame everyone in the school for not liking her when she cusses them out every day..."

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