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"😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 That was the most descriptive fanfiction I have read in a while!!! Jungkook seems like such a bad boy, with his words and actions!! I loved this book, but I can't see Jungkook as a good boy now haha!!! He would make one hot mafia king. But great job! Just work on grammar and plot, cause you didn't have much of a structure, you just wrote a scene.... Not complaining cause it was hot....😳🤩"

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