Time Well Spent

"I love this story, especially with it being a standalone. The plot was intriguing, character development was done nicely and there was enough mystery retained. A lot of stories try to further explain some events which ruin the plot because the lustre vanishes. I'm glad mm2537 did they did. I really liked the protagonist and the antagonist. I wasn't initially impressed with the stereotypes and stereotypical situation with the best friends but the writing style kept me going. Don't lose hope in the story because all is deliberate and most is explained. One thing I didn't appreciate is that the ending is cut off. That might have to do with the coding because the box for a review pops up just before the story finishes. Perhaps the web developer can look at that - I'm using Chrome on Windows to read."