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Excellent Read

"I like how Lucas’ character was revealed. I didn’t think I could read about his childhood and young adulthood. That information was necessary to understand the character. I truly enjoyed the story."

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1234wac

"Interesting story . Roller coaster of emotions Great read "

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Fantastic Read

"I loved the fact that you gave great detail into why Luca became how he is today. It's a great storyline, addicted from the beginning till the end. Hope to read more of your work. "

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5 stars

"Wow it was good , yeah just go read it "

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Emotional Rollercoaster

"Every turn with these two, I’m crying. Ending was not what I expected but it was great nonetheless and didn’t disappoint"

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Love this book already

"This by far has been an amazing book. I honestly think Luca needs more therapy "

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Very intresting read

"Good story ,very intresting ....but he would have had to kiss my ass because i wasnt submitting to anyone lol"

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She gets me

"This is such brutal story. Written well. Brilliant storyline kept me fascinated throughout. Loved it 💖💖💖"

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Good

"Sad story but hope it ends Good 🫣"

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Pain & love

"All your Novels are the bomb, I love them all, pls complete everything on Inkit, pls"

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Good

"Simple plot and very common instances. Plot could have been more original and in depth"

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Ok so far

"Need to read more"

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Good story

"An nice appetizer story"

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