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What is your opinion?
Nice Job!
"I loved your style of writing for this book! I also loved how direct and sarcastic/funny Ash is! I think there are a few plot holes (like didn't Dylan say he knew someone who had powers like Ash?) and (what was that hole she fell through?) but over all I really, really liked it. I think maybe some more detail about certain things/places would be nice but like I said overall I really enjoyed it!! :)"
Thriller
"I love the author's style she creates Ash to be this sarcastic teenager and her talking to the reader brings a special you-are-in-the-book feeling. The action aced and high-school day was exciting to read. It makes us have a close relationship with Ashlynn"
