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Enigma

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Summary

Set in an alternative universe with events similar to ours, story of a teenage boy who seemed ordinary at once expect the part he is exceptionally genius and a world class assassin plus CEO of Law inc.His notable feature is bright green eyes circumferenced by a golden rim.This ain't all, somehow these eyes can be found in all myths. . . . . . Who is The Boy Well......... We'll find out Plot is hidden inside plot. If you could find it you're a true reader. Share it with the world in comments. For starters age and last name of character is given in chapter "Introducing Enigma" and first name is not in story find it somewhere in 4 lettered heading Suggestions and critics are accepted......

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
5
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Introducing Enigma

"Given the previous condition of your work, it is highly unlikely I'll buy what you are saying", he said.

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"But Mr.Lawrence...!",

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"you have lost the right to speak, anything you say can be used against you. In lamest terms, just shut up."

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While the police was dragging the culprit out of Mr Lawrence's office stood his mother. She tried to stop the police but a wave of fear strike her as she saw his grim face. In 17 years she never saw him this much angry even the staff of entire incorporation was praying for their safety.

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"To the work, NOW!" Said Lawrence

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"Are u alright, kid?" asked Mother

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"Isn't that beautiful how you came after all these years."

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"You know this is not correct I always cared for my children."

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"oh c'mon! don't get me started on this"

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"What do you mean, my dear boy?"

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"You left me when I was 3 for your job. I was raised by Ayten. She was the only one person among you I could call family. Two years back when I was merely fifteen, she took seventeen bullets just because of your stupid decision and you and father didn't even bothered to come at funeral and now you're here telling me that you love us. Isn't that ironic. You only love money and a nice big house. I am warning you mother. Get the hell out of office at once before i do something "

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The world isn't kind, neither does it play a good game. We can accept it and rule it or close our eyes and get ourselves crushed. Either way we can't escape the destiny.

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When he entered the house the clock ticked 1 am. With a deep breath he turned on the light. He looked at his study table and saw a pile of papers.Another silent night passed and nothing had happened. Its been 80 hours since he last slept.

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It was his first day at college generally at his age students at high school but he passed high school at fourteen. Since then he was majoring, in past three years he achieved degrees in culturalism bussniss, criminology programming, history, and historical reconstruction. Now he was at college for further degrees in psychology, cosmology biotechnology, toxins and philosophy.

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author

Dang! Great story, but just a few spelling errors and punctuation errors which I'm sure you can fix through an edit. With an edit this would be just amazing! Love the idea! keep going! if you need any help, always here.

7 years
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Appreciate the assist........ 😋

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very interesting and intriguing plot, but there are many grammatical errors due to which it sometimes becomes difficult to grasp the emotions of the dialogues. once you rectify these errors it would turn out to be a fantastic story.

7 years

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