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Gripping throughout

"Overall this has been the most enjoyable and gripping read on Inkitt so far. The blurb had me gripped immediately and pretty much all the way through I was on the edge of my seat and wanted to know what's going to happen next. Its a dark subject but a great mystery with lots of suspense with great characters. The style is brilliant, everything flowed smoothly and I loved the feeling created by the style, I could picture it a s a film or a mystery/crime series and would honestly love a follow up with Blake and Sara. I think the style improved and improved as the story developed and once all the characters main were introduced. I was really impressed with the grammar and punctuation and couldn't see any fault there. Over all: really really good. I want to see it on netflix!"

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A mystery with a patience

"First thing you have to know about this story, at least the first thing that dawned on me, is that this story is so definitely not for the impatient of mind. A gripping tale from the very first sentence, and with a plot both grounded, relevant, and relatable in this present-day world of ours; that's exactly what this mystery-fantasy is. But despite all of these, the author expertly takes his time in telling his tale; not dumping out all the mystery on us at once as many writers of this genre tend to do, or withholding information so much that the story starts to feel non-progressive (also like many other writers of this genre tend to do). The story flows smooth and natural, with a patience like that of a grandma telling her favorite grandson a story she so much loves. Anyway, if you're one for the investigative, the truly grounded, and the natural smooth-sailing wave of words on a page, then this story is one for you."

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