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Wolves

"Great story, sad ending. But that is life. Excellent development of characters, beginning to end. Got hooked on this story right from the first chapter."

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Very good stuff!

"First book i read since years. Thanks for this engaging and emotional story. Nice personal backgrounds!"

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Wolves

"Found this story a bit hard to get into at the beginning, trying to keep track of characters and what their place was in the flow of the story. This changed as things went along and background and personality of characters emerged. Thoroughly enjoyed this book and would recommend to others. "

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Very good story....compelling

"Very nice read, compelling story and character development was alright. One of the best e-books I've read in a while "

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Very enjoyable !

"Very well written. Action was none stop and story flowed smoothly. I also enjoyed the character development , from men to military Assassins .👍🏼"

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I think it's my first sci-fi fiction I have read and the best. I was never a lover of sci-fi fiction but this book has lead to reading it. I give all 5 stars

"I think it's my first sci-fi fiction I have read and the best. I was never a lover of sci-fi fiction but this book has lead to reading it. I give all 5 stars"

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Wolves

"Great book totally worth the read. I would recommend it to anyone who likes science fiction or action novels. "

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Mrkennedy

"Very much captivating story"

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Great

"Great story so far really interesting story "

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Enjoyable read

"Very few grammar and syntax mistakes unlike most things I've read on this app. I enjoyed the plot and the writer did well in keeping the story alive. "

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Wolves

"Although kind of "rushed" at some points, I feel like it was all a culmination to the end. Nothing left out, and definitely awesome to go through. I definitely felt that emotion towards the end."

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Captivating, from start to finish

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The plot was well concieved, well written. Even the ending was perfect. The only part I didnt entirely understanf was the Disciple. But, excellent work."

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wolves

" The book was well written, although it needed a bit of editing. The technology was not overdone as so many sci-fi books that paint themselves into a corner with impossible tech. The plot was well thought out and the whole book was an enjoyable read. "

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Wolves

"Once you start reading it's very difficult to stop...and before you know you're at the last page...very good book..."

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The misfits

"I'm really enjoying this story so far and, can't wait to see what happens next. The author has a very good imagination. I would recommend this story to anyone. "

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Wolves

"Really enjoyable readcant wait to see what happens in the next chapters coming up i hope that alpha general dies slowly lol "

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Wolves

"The general gist of the story is how one man changed over the corse of the story with the men he didn't like at first but evolved into a fighting force and how all the men changed with there goals "

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Great story

"Liked lead characters and plot. Writing style a little stilted and needs a little more detail about the surrounding area. Progressed well and seemed to keep time line in place. Liked the story, kept me intrigued."

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Interesting

"Written well. Definitely curious what is going to happen. Hope the general gets his. Lot of secrets."

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