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Wonderful

"This was a wonderful story. It has all the important parts. Read it!"

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Very fresh

"It's really nice to read a love story of people above 40. It feels more real. And it is too.. I liked Carla's decision too. Romance is not the only thing that keeps the relationship. There is much more. Also loved the end too. "

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Refreshing, engaging, and relatable

"The plot will keep you on your toes. Not your usual main leads, but the story could happen to anyone. It was romantic in a good and in a ‘bad’ way. I loved how the story ended ❤️"

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Really really enjoyed the book!!

"It was so refreshing to read about about people over 40! It’s so hard to find stories written that are not cliché. This story was so very very real that sooooo many can relate to. It was short and well written. Great read! "

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Changes

"Good book. Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Few typos but nothing big. I wasn't crazy about the end tho. I'd rather Pete lived and they would have enjoyed their lives with the many grandkids. I did feel like this story could have been much fuller, more depth to characters, more detailed into the political aspects and made into quite the novel. You have some serious talent!! Would love to see more stories."

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Changes, a great short story

"I really enjoyed this story, it was active, loved the plot and the ending was great, wanting me to read more from this story but it was the end sadly. It didn't give me the closure I need from the book but I wonder if that was the authors intent, to make you wonder what happens next even though we won't find out I would recommend this to anyone tbh"

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great

"This books reminds us of the reaility of life the bad and the good its a great book to read thank you author for writing such a great book stay safe and happy! may god bless u!"

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Changes

"Yippee, loved this book so much. Could not put it down. So real. The challenges of a married life. Very true. 💓💓💓👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽Kudos to you Charlene. 🤗🤗🤗"

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Brilliant

"Loved it! What a fantastic story loved how you had older characters as most storylines are based on people aged 20-30yrs. So refreshing to have mature characters that I can relate too. Fantastic writing as always 👍"

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William

"Is she in a loveless marriage?"

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Changes

"Very good story I couldn't put it down. Love your writing"

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Times changes

"I like the story . It is like reading a Danielle Steel novel where mostly the characters are middle age or soon to retire, of cheating and forgiveness,of having second chance."

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