What is your opinion?
I like the Twist
"I like the Twist where the hero is an arrogant toerag and the assistant actually does everything but the hero takes the credit. I really look forward to reading more. I didn't see any grammar or punctuation mistakes but I usually don't. I got really absorbed and I like the idea that you put in the story. The Quest stuff is old but you added a new twist to it by letting the wizard make a mistake and it gives a 'normal' person aura. This indicates that nobody in your world is perfect. Isaac seems weird to say the least but I like him. Definitely continue."
Review
"This is a pretty funny story, what with Brave Heroics and all. The plot is pretty cliche, but that's fine because of the twist you put on the characters. I look forward to seeing it unfold! However, it can be difficult to tell who exactly is talking at times, so if you could fix that it would be wonderful. Also, what happened to the prologue?"
