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Breathless Foe

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Summary

What if your rival isn't even alive? Copyright 2016 Short Story Germayne King

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

it began

Raven met Michael in their junior year. Michael moved from a couple of states away from God knows why.


Michael used to be the golden boy of his former school until a tragedy caused his fall out. So when he met Raven, he was a whole different person.



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hmmm, interesting start

6 years

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