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Amazing and Gratifying

"I loved how long this story was and how detailed it was for all the characters and settings. It really made my imagination take flight. The plot was also very well thought out, though I would like to know how Sasuke and Naruto’s journey went and how Itachi and his team were on their journey. There were also a few spelling errors but nothing to bad that would inhibit your reading. But, in all it was a really great read. It was funny but also had an emotional side as well. Thank you for the story and I hope you continue writing great stories!!"

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The Hidden Truths Of The Village Hidden In The Leaves

"I like this story very much, as it is a version of my very first anime 'Naruto'. I would recommend this book to all my friends, anime fans or not. But the reason I have chosen this rating is because of the way the story interested me and kept me with bathed breath throughout all of the chapters. I hope you can write more stories like this. "

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So good!

"One of the better Naruto Fanfictions I have read! I love the Sasunaru and how you wrote Kurama. I also loved the way you stuck to canon as much as you could for a fic (I just really like how writers use accurate facts from the show). There are a good bit of grammer mistakes but they weren't too confusing and some actually made me laugh (in a good way, not in the mocking way). I have really enjoyed your writing! =D"

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nice

"i think the story was excellent with a great plot you should totally do a part two because i feel as if it needs more to it"

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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer."

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