What is your opinion?
The Springer
"A. The story is appropriate. It did really served its genre which is fantasy. B. This story is set on the first point of view type. Having a story that is set on first point of view is good for we can know the thought of each character. C. The thing that made this story great is that its genre is not boring. The plot, the whole story have its own amazing-ness. There is a fantasy generated story that is boring but this is different for it is really unique. D. This story is different from other stories that I've read for the plot is really something that I haven't read before. It has given me the chills while reading, it excites me on what will happen next. It makes me curious on what will be the thing that'll lead the characters on liking or loving each other."
Good but needs better wording
"I like it so far but need to get the grammar a little more consistent. It’s turning out to be a good story It seems like it was posted a little too fast. Ask someone to help with the grammar "
