Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Kees

"Absolutely beautiful On top of the list with Partwolf Whitesabretoofh Jaz Cullen Waiting for part three already Never give up cause you’re doing better and better 🙏😎👍👍👍👍"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Addicting sci-fi story full of action and love

"Part 2 of a great series, this time its placed more in Eloh world and we get to know more aliens ( females, males and pets). The clash of culture is halarious and heart breaking in places. Annie still kicks ass as a fire pixy, awesome pilot, scientists, worrier and finally as a lover 😁"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Can't wait to read more

"This is one of the craziest, most entertaining and most awesome Sci-Fi stories I have ever had the pleasure to read. I hope there will be more! It's totally addicting!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
AnnaCat5

"Good premise but could use a little fleshing out."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation