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Albion's Hero

"This was a really good story and the writer was amazing at describing the details. If you ask me this should be made into a movie.....If you're the writer of this story, please do a part 2 where Lyle returns and skorm has infested Van. after defeating Van he marries Alex or something like that"

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Albion's Hero

"I liked the concept of the story but the writer made grammatical mistakes many times"

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Albion's Hero

"I liked the concept of the story but the writer made grammatical mistakes many times"

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Albion's Hero

" I have been searching for good storys and this one takes the cake. This story has basically everything I say a story should have. Keep writing storys like this. Please I need them."

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