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Pretty Good

"I was expecting this story to be just like a normal Zelink fan-fiction, but it wasn’t. Instead, it takes place in our world, with a very different scenario. The plot could’ve developed a bit slower, and I felt that the climax of the story went by pretty quick, but it’s a short story, after all. This, overall, is a good fan-fic for any Zelink fan. {The image at the end was also I nice touch, I should say.)"

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