I really like the story

"I like that you are writing long chapters, and I also like the story"

"null"

Kinda cringey

"I mean at first I was really liking this story but then you had to make Percy have a harem. I really don’t like how you made the hunters of Artemis end up liking Percy because these are girls that are strong and independent and I really liked how there were at least some characters that were alone and weren’t sad about it. But then you made it worse and added Pokemon in the story.....And at that point I was down for the count. At first I thought you were joking but then I realized you weren’t and I was really disappointed. But on a happier note you had really good grammar and it was easy to understand this story’s plot and I think you have the makings of a great writer."