Chapter Chapter 1 - Breathe | Motive by Squid at Inkitt
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Motive

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Summary

Jin Xiuying is a male figure skater who has been skating for over 8 years. After practicing endlessly 6 days a week for years, he had begun to land quads. His status in the skating world shoots up after his first competition with his shiny new quad sal and quad toe, and begins to receive more attention from fans and fellow skaters alike. Some attention, unwanted. Skaters from around the world begin to compete against Xiuying, some more determined than others. But exactly how determined does someone have to be to consider homicide as an option?

Genre
Mystery/Drama
Author
Squid
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 - Breathe

Beep... Beep... Beep...

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My eyes opened to the sight of people standing over me...

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Who are they?

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Where am I?

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My mind slowly became aware of my surroundings. The sour smell of lemon disinfectant filled my nose. My body felt heavy. I couldn't move.

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A tall man with glasses and a surgical mask stood over me. He said something, but I couldn't hear very well. He wrote on his clipboard and walked away.

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I turned my head slowly. I remembered my parents. There they were, sitting quietly. They smiled at me, but I could see the worry in their eyes.

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"How are you feeling?" My mom spoke quietly, in Chinese.

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"Heavy." I looked at myself. I had a bandage on my leg.

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"The surgery went well, Jin Xiuying. The stitches have successfully stopped the blood flow from your wounds. You will be out of the hospital in about a month." The doctor's voice boomed in my ears.

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A month? Stitches? Wounds?

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I remember what happened now.

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