What is your opinion?
Wow
"very nise"
Great Action
"Wow. By far the most action packed novel I have read. These scenes are pulled off very well. Extremely entertaining, especially if you like action. Only a couple critiques and one suggestion. There is very little going on other than exhilarating fight sequences. Try giving your readers a little breather from the action. This doesn't mean you have to slow it down and write boring filler, just that you can add some low-stake, conversational, and relationship/character developing scenes. For instance, my favorite scene in your story was actually not a fight scene at all. It was Ling Fei's nightmare, because I felt that it added some insight into her character. That scene was a good example of a scene that was still thought-provoking without physical conflict. Without scenes like these, there is little room for expanding what we know about the characters, other than their proficiency in combat. Additionally, you could allow for more injuries, more close calls, and more narrow escapes, to you action/combat sequences to make your characters seem a bit more vulnerable and lacking of plot-armor. Lastly, if you change your dialogue from being written italicized to being written within quotations, your novel would be in a standard format that most people wouldn't have to adjust to. Seriously, I can not stress enough how well you write Action / Sci-Fi. I love the time structure in the beginning. It throws the reader write into the thick of it, allowing for the reader to see the characters first as a team. It almost felt like I was watching a movie and not reading a book. Great job!"
