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What is your opinion?

I’m very interested!

"I’m loving it so far, I can relate from when I was in high school. The twist in the story when she almost turned him down and then like shouted out to him, showing her true feelings. I loved that bit. “Daniel angelic voice” just spell check that 😋 Looking forward to more!!"

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Love it

"TEAAAAA sis continueeeee"

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I’ll be real with you

"I’m so sorry but it felt like I was reading some middle school type of story. It needs improvement overall"

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