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They said the title too short=[

"This book has a unique plot although I've read a few books about mermaids that has a similar plotline. Almost all of them seems to have these weird scientists. I guess there has to be party poopers everywhere. But what makes it unique is the lack of spiciness. It's not a bad thing tho. There are a few books I like without them.it kind of just went well with the plot too. If I forget this I might just come back to read this again "

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Super cute

"Absolutely adorable. Was not expecting this when I started reading this but was pleasantly surprised"

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Interesting

"Interesting concept, well written, nice short story"

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Do Not Recommend

"I'm guessing this was written by someone pretty young. While I'm sure it was a great step in the author's growth, the story is not really worth reading. I loved the premise, but the follow-through is disorganized, nonsensical, and incoherent. The characters behave as if they are either elementary-age children or adults strung out on cocaine. Plot devices are poorly used, interactions make no sense, the storyline lacks build and climax, and the characters are paper-thin. Kudos to the author for the effort (and improvement, I'm sure), but this is not a worthy read for purposes of entertainment."

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