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Gripping stuff

"I liked the read, it was a good storyline, some parts where he was she and vice versa but it wasn't difficult to make sense of it. Great story, cant wait to see what you write next"

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The Love Triangle

"Kind of diferent... The narrative is in 3rd person... I like it a lot..."

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The love triangle

"Its nice to read this book thiers a twist and turn for every chapter its like a real lifestyle but sad to say they been a friend for sometime but day end up no more because of a man but she learned to get the true person to be with, thank you for felling so emotional for this book hope theirs more 💞💞💞"

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The love triangle

"I love the book overall. It was very interesting. The story development was good along with the plot. I also like the adult content in the book."

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The Love Triangle

"The struggle is real for both men and women to find that one person with all the ups and downs of each relationship. There where times I wanted to just slap Tina and Judy both, i was almost certain Johnny and Simone where the same guys both by the last 2 chapters and the stunt pulled by Simone ( the man whore)..I’m just glad Tina found and chose Ken over that man whore! This was a very interesting story, thank you for writing it! "

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The Love triangle

"Such a lovely novel. Wow!!!! Simon right was in shame for such treatment he gave the ladies. Wish they bit him. I feel sorry for Judy. I will share the novel to my friebds and family. You are a great writer "

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Your novel is sexy 😉

"Love this novel 🌹 waiting for you to post more novel 😃"

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Interesting

"This an interesting story. I like it! "

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Good book

"Hard 5o folw with English errors but still a great book."

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the love triangle

"the storyline is absolutely compelling, it feels like it's a real person, and not just a character. the author makes us really feel empathy for the characters, which is an amazing quality in a writer"

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The love triangle

"The plot wasn't bad, I actually thought it was going to revolve around the 2 female characters and bringing in a male character, there were moments that were I felt unnecessary. It was about that one character and there journey so that was done well. I was surprised by the middle and ending so it wasn't predictable. Overall not a bad read👍"

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Wow

"Interedting"

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The love triangle

"The story is great but a bit short. So is Simon also Johnnie? How does Judy suddenly marry Simon? There is big gap on how or why Judy suddenly going to marry Simon."

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The Love Triangle

"I think this book was very interesting with lots of twists. This book is great and I would recommend that everyone give it a chance."

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Fast, straight to the point.

"I don't like when things drag on, so for me this was a nice read. My only problem with it is that it read like a summary because there was almost no dialogue between the characters. "

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Nice

"Overall, the plot is okay but for me, I prefer there is more conversation between Judy and Tina (it make the characters more alive). Keep it up, Max. Don't stop writing."

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Mom3333

"Premise of the story is good. Writing is a little rough. Some incomplete thoughts here and there. "

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