Sequel?
"Please we need book two 🥹! Also this was the first time ive ever seen my name in a novel. That was pretty cool."
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"Please we need book two 🥹! Also this was the first time ive ever seen my name in a novel. That was pretty cool."
"It's a really awesome book. Loving it so far, the plot is good and suspenseful. Probably one of my fave books so far"
"I thought this was the best book I've read on Inkit until the end. When it doesn't end I hope you write more books in this series. I look forward to reading more books by you. I would recommend this book to anyone. "
"I love the story line so much. Can't wait for the sequel. The human Tomas and the elf Tomaz was a little confusing since the names are so similiar."
"I liked it overall. "
"Excellent story line but I need the rest of the story? Does Alekzand’t get his rest or is his tiredness from the evil surrounding him? Does good overcome evil? What about the battle? Does king Dein and Melemthia reunite? Does Melenthia help her brother tap into his Elvin line? What happens to Maddon? I need the next book in this series! "
"This was a great story. I would be very interested in the sequel. "
"Great book. "
"Very adventurous"
"Wow this was exigent, been a while that i enjoyed a book that much. "
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"This book is truly special. The plot, the characters and the way the story flows is so engrossing and magical that I found it virtually impossible to put down. The character relationships were particularly fascinating and Melenthia's character was fascinating. Cannot wait to see what happens next!"
"very well written. from start to finish. I loved the plot and how it flowed. I enjoyed the characters and was engrossed by the mystery unfolding. I could barely put the book down. and look forward to seeing more"
"This story is very well written and flows beautifully. I became engrossed in the romance element as well as the impending war. The action scenes are also depicted very well. I can't wait to read what happens next!"
"The writing is quite good enjoying the plot just enough excitement and romance can't wait to read the rest good book"
"Is there a sequel, if not very bad ending. "
"I loved it!!! There were a few grammar errors, but overall a great book. I liked the plot and the characters are easy to connect to. I wish the story was in first person, and I wish it didnt go back and fourth between characters...but that's just me I will definitely be reading more!"
"This book has a really great plot. The author really makes you feel connected to the main character. There are twist around every corner you never see coming.. Great read for sure and I can't wait to see what happens next. "
"Each and every charecter develops during the whole course of the journey and keeps secretly love for the princess . However the way that writter expressed each situatuons that the princess faced quite relevant and keeps the suspense always at the end of the chapter. . . .which makes the reader more curious and cunning towards the climax."
"I am a kind of a person who don't prefer t read books... No matter what I just can't read.... The application I have got its amazing through which I got to read this amazing book.... It keeps you interested and go on.... I felt it amazing. This book helped me to start reading. Talk about th story wonderful what all I can say... The beautiful description that make you fell you are watching it. I literally feel it. Since the beginning I wanted to know whether fallon die or what.... It kept suspense which is fine... But I wanted to know I wish it could have clear the suspense...! However amazing book."