Tense and fun

"This story was really tense and a lot of fun. I like your style. Your descriptions “face frozen forever in an image of pure terror” “like a caterpillar in a cocoon, immobile and helpless” help you not just visualize your writing, but really feel it. I’m a bit claustrophobic so it was scary to read about Nicki being blindfolded while the men restrain her more and more til she can’t move. You had a good blend of mystery, thriller and romance going on here."