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Great

"The sense of place in this is extraordinary. Whether it's a single room or an entire city the author makes you feel like you're standing in it. Immersive doesn't cover it."

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Her fire

"😍 I loved i it is so interesting "

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First chapter intriguing

"Starting at chapter 1 upload. Lots of potential here! I can’t wait to read more about the rituals and moon goddess hinted at!"

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