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Good story

"It is a really good story so far,just wish the chapters besides name could have been listed so it would be easyer to find. And i do hope it is a finished story"

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Brilliant!!!!

"I am in love with this book... I cnt wait for more... Its one of the good books l have ever read. Well done"

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When Mother Calls

"Needs some editing. Good story, we’ll set up for a sequel"

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When mother calls

"Extremely well written!! Loved the whole plot. I really hope there is a book 2. Be a waste not to follow with a sequel. Very clever."

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Love!

"The story line and technical bits are great, mostly. It does seem like it was written by someone with less experience writing, but this is definitely an author I'd be happy to follow as they grow!"

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Riveting

"Absolutely loved this story. Will there be any more updates? "

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Mother's calling

"Very interesting story"

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Omgggggg 😭😍

"Thank you so much ❤️ I've been waiting for an update since like forever This book is amazing just like the other ones (you wrote)🔥🔥 Ps: I really hope to meet Morgana soon "

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Soooooooo gooood

"I can not put it down! I just keep reading! I don't want it to end!"

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When mother calls

"This has been a great read, keep up the great writing. "

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