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The Lyrics of My Soul

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Summary

To turn my thoughts into comprehensible words I wrote them down. Now they are here for you to see. Take a look into what is my mind and tell me, do you think I am broken? Beaten? Or perhaps strong for continuing. I will look to both the positive and the negative, but to me, my mind is hurt. Tell me... do you think so too?

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Poem of Thought 1

Battles ~ Kiersten Schultz, Nov. 22, 2019


I can't help but wonder,

When the first blood was shed,

When the first life was taken,

How the last peace was broken,

How I was pulled in,

Was I always a part of it?

Was it simply meant to be?

Why did it end up with me?

Why did violence come unbidden?

What makes me the epicentre?

What makes me so hated?

Who did I offend for this to happen?

Who wanted me so beat down?

Where did I lose this battle?

Where in my life,

Was I so unhappy,

That I hated myself so much,

That I started a battle,

Against my own life?


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