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Great story!

"I thought this short story was great! It was cool being able to take the perspective of a young character with schizophrenia and seeing the different visions like the snake, or the running wolf. It’d be cool to see how the main character Zoey warns her next victim!"

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Very dark and thrilling

"This short story is very well-written, which is impressive considering the author's other books are so different. The character's schizophrenia added to the thrilling aspect of it all, since the reader didn't know what was real and what wasn't. Overall, definitely an enjoyable read."

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