What is your opinion?
Good one!!
"Short and a simple!! But a small thing was quite predictable but back story and emotions were spot on!! Loved it!!"
You Are What You Eat
"Absolutely amazing!! The name is so fitting and has such a good amount of symbolism it's very good. I really enjoyed this and mostly binged it. Great job author, keep up the great work!!!"
You are what you eat
"I really like how the plot and settings of the story is going. I havent enjoyed reading os much in a while"
more chapters
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You Are What You Eat
"I loved this story a lot. I didn't know what the plots were til the clues came in. I got spooked a little bit but then better when I came to the end!"
You are what you eat
"I love this novel definitely a quick and easy read but extremely interesting. Would 100% recommend this to lovers of all things horror or thriller. Quick easy read 10/10"
This is amazing
"This is a great story and I thought this was very well written. Even though things were kind of obvious from the start, still keeps you hooked until the very last chapters. The short back stories of the characters were also very well done. It feels familiar but also different. Which is always a good thing. A few suggestions for the author : (For the sake of giving constructive feedback) It would be great to have some reasons for why they left Blake at the house unattended like that. Also while the victim was tied and free to scream. The two sisters compliance, even when their sister was murdered felt odd. (We know they are afraid, but still that was weird) Anyway this was a great read. I would recommend this to anyone. Glad I found this."
Omg
"This book is to good coming From Someone who hates Reading . this book had me shaking in suspense and I want to Say Sheep UP the good work"
Repugnant... but in a good way
"I have read through all the chapters of this short novel on a single breath and can now concur that it's brilliantly written! Writing in first-person POV is never an easy task because you have to walk the reading audience view the plot development through eyes of one of the main characters and at the same time make sure it feels believable and authentic. In my opinion, 'You are what you eat' handles this task perfectly. I was really glad that the language of this work isn't overly eloquent or sophisticated and the entire narration really does feel like a retelling of the story in the own words of a 17-year old teenager (for the most part). At the same time, all the necessary artistic devices and methods are there - it's suspenseful, dramatic, nerve-tingling, disturbing and many other things in all the right moments, just like a good thriller/horror story is supposed to be. And I was also very pleasantly surprised with the way you handled the very complicated topic of cannibalism n this story. This thing is quite revolting and profane in itself and scavenging on all the details might easily drive it overboard. You managed to maintain a perfect balance by revealing just enough to instill angst into the readers, yet not overdoing this and making it plain-out obscene and explicit. Also, another pleasant surprise for me was the fact that for all its darkness and negativity, this story wasn't completely without its heartfelt moments, like Anne's repentance or reconciliation between Blake and his big brother. I believe that in novels centered around the topic of unfathomable lows humanity can sink to, it's especially important to leave some room for hope and show there's always a light at the end of the tunnel. Altogether, a nearly picture-perfect short horror novel, barely anything about it I can critique or contest. All I can do is sincerely thank you for uploading this stuff to Inkitt and letting me and everybody else enjoy it here. Congratulations on creating a masterpiece! Wishing you every success with your further writing! "
Great
"Great book"
Amazing story 👏👏👏 BRAVO!!!
"Amazing story 👏👏👏 BRAVO!!!"
Very catchy
"I liked it "
good
"I like how short and interesting it. is"
You are what you eat
"It was so good can not wait for the next one so good they got caught after such a, long time of not getting caught "
you are what you eat
"I loved this story!!! i loved the fact that Anne stood up to her psychotic sister. if you were to make another one I would definitely read it. Maybe in the second one is where one of the sisters escaped jail and went after looking for the survivors and the one who snitched on her. You did a very good job on this story."
You are what you eat
"Very interesting story, liked the characters ...def hope more is to come 🙂"
You are what you eat
"The Story is very good!"
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You Are What You Eat.
"Hi Katie This story shows great potential. I expected Blake to investigate the parcel in the fridge at his first opportunity. Some parts of your story were hard to follow. The girls wouldn't leave Blake alone in the house if they had someone hidden in the cellar. Why didn't they leave Blake's clothes for him; they would have gone into the first wash earlier in the story. Blake would be more likely to check out the cellar before showering. Where was Anne's POV, and what is a POV? Blake was alone in the house so he couldn't know what was said or done at the POV. What was the reason for the POV? You had some great backstory about the girls. Wouldn't Colleen have told Blake they were foster sisters when she introduced them? If I'd been Blake, I would have disappeared as far from the house as possible, the first chance I had. Perhaps Nancy told Blake something about the girls that convinced him to leave. Nancy would never have gone into the house after ringing the cops. Why would Blake's older brother suddenly turn up? It's unlikely the brothers would change, so why did Blake go back? I hope my comments have helped you. Keep writing. This could be a masterpiece. If you would like to review my book, ‘Who’s There?’, here is the link. Who’s There? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/horror/893926?ink_source=users.profile&ink_block=stories&ink_page_number=&ink_metric= Thank you LittleScribbler"
You are What You Eat
"I thought this was a good story. Wasn't expecting the outcome but it turned out to be a female serial killer. Outstanding. "
