16 chapters read
love it
"i love it your awesome queen"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
0 chapters read
,
"Interesting storyline. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar."
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
25 chapters read
Little speach down there.
"I really like this story,it's so relatable to many girls because every brother is overprotective when it comes to boys. I read many stories here,and this is one of my favourites. You are really talented when it comes to writing.High school ❤️ stories are the favourites of the most people because it's relatable because everyone had their high school expirience.💜 Some of them were fun,some of them not but it was important because we find ourselfs in that age and state what we want to be in our life. Thank you for writing this story,it's amazing and thank you so much because you finished this story and didn't leaved it unfinished,like many stories here. Hope you have a good day/night.💙"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
Amazing
"Its amazing I Laughed and I got pissed off but I laughed the most thou"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
0 chapters read
😍😍😍
"Amazing! 😍😍 Slowly evolving .. in the end, they settled with each other. How cute. Young love."
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
My 5 overprotective brothers
"Please of this story please and see how it ends thanks keep up the good work "
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
Cute story
"I liked the characters, the ending is rushed a little, and you don't get to see the two mains in a relationship as much as I want to. But it does have lots of funny parts and the brothers are fun. "
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
2 chapters read
Everything about it is just perfect
"I looooove😍😍😍😍😍"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
17 chapters read
I love this story. It is so fun and we can all find a part of the story that fites in with our life. The story just flowse between Amanda and Sedastian.
"I liked that we could see the story from two perspective and know how each character looks like even if they dont get talked about alot"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
Book
"Good book xx"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
26 chapters read
My 5 overprotective brothers
"Well I am impressed with the story. Happy ending and lovely ending, though there are a few grammatical errors but that can be ignored when the plot and characters are nice. So I love it and ofcourse the author writing style is also good👌👌👌"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
1 chapters read
Love and friendship
"Love base on friendship always last longer sometimes, its only happens when they stay true to each other.love the story.welldone and good job author."
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
0 chapters read
5 overprotective Brothers
"There is just to much I can say about this book. I am not a writer and I am not going to say anything about this book. I have read books that are good and I have read some that need work. So I am leaving it at that."
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
Sweet Ending
"Overall sweet story with detailed characters. I feel there were some missed opportunities for further character and storyline development. The epilogue explained everything that happened to each character, but as a reader I would have loved to read a few more chapters to get the full experience. Still ended how I hoped it would...Sebastian and Amanda <3"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
Cute story
"Needs more in the middle seb took a long time to ask"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
You really should be writing more of their feelings and not just what they are talking. There’s also sometimes hard to figure who is talking to whom.
"It was too quickly rushed to the end. The start of the book was promissing but then it got lame because of the rushed writing. "
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
An honest review ..?
".............."
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
27 chapters read
Its like a diary
"I don’t really like it. It has no story as my review title suggests. I like that i get a glimpse of american highschool life, but i think i like a book with a plot. I think the author gave a feel of having 5 older brothers which is nice, other than that if anyone has time its a good read. Not to my liking though. Good luck to the author. Will look into some of your work still. Thank you!"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
28 chapters read
What to say...
"I kind of liked the book, but may not be the target audience. It's evident that the author is fairly young so the book is rather naive and the end is a bit too rushed. What's killing it is the grammar, seriously - I needed to read some paragraph twice to understand what she meant. But not to sound too bitchy - hey girl, keep writing, you sure have potential (and don't get people like me discourage you ;) )"
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?
0 chapters read
Rushed ending
"Rushed story Missing story Looks incomplete "
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation
Was this review helpful to you?