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Hot hot hot

"She shouldnt hav screwed Khalil. I dont trust him and he is aggressive. But then Kale took long to make her luna"

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Twins

"I love this book so far I can’t wait to see what happens next!"

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Torn between two alphas

"This book is amazing "

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Love love love

"Loving this book feel alittle sorry for both alphas "

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This book is really intresting..am team iris and kahlil, i rate this book five stars. I love how she got to choose kahlil.wish she made her chose right. Well the other alpha had a mate before her.

"Its getting more intresting."

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Lovely story I guess

"With all the books I read this one is confusing me. Two mate????"

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Two mates

"Nicely written but still incomplete needs to be finished "

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Caught between two alphas

"Wow that was great thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Two alphas,one mate

"Wow!wow! And more wow!"

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So far so good

"Going a little slower than I would like. I hope she pi is Khalil because I think kale has something up his sleeve. I don't think he's a good guy."

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Can't wait you read more

"Can't wait to read more"

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Great Read

"Interesting read. I like Khalil his determination is great "

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Caught between two alphas

"Good story"

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Good story

"Like the story so far can’t wait to see how it ends. Would love to know what is wrong with his back."

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Interesting concept

"Choosen vs Fated very intense "

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Caught between two alphas

"Good story"

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Review of caught between two alphas

"Your a great writer just some puntuations needed and clarity sometimes as to who is talking "

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Torn between two alphas

"I choose this rating because so far it has kept me interested and does a great job stating what is going on"

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Caught Between Two Alphas

"It's sort of confusing as to who is caught between the 2 Alphas as the book begins each Alpha seems to have someone they are mated with or potential mated with. So I'll have to keep reading to see what happens. "

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