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Guardian

"The story is powerful; I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Beautiful.

"Brilliantly imaginative. Detailed. Well thought out. Different. Intriguing. I love the flow of the story and the way this author paints with words. It has something unique—a voice of its own. Well done. .I'm not going to nitpick over grammar or punctuation because I am no expert, but I will suggest shorter chapters. Loads of talent here."

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I love it

"I totally loved the part where she began to remember things. The part where she pushed the doctor through the wall was epic"

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Guardian

"It's a sad but happy story, but I think it was a little messy.... I had to reread some parts to understand them"

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Great read

"I really like this book so far. Interesting story. "

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Great boik

"This book is very interesting so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope they don't get caught by the bad scientist. I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a good adventure. "

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Great

"Very well written and thought out. I love where the story is going and how well it was scripted out. Cant wait for more!"

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When will the next part released?

"I really want to know what happens next please release the next part. "

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Guardian

"I love the story line, it's outstanding. No worries about it being cliche. It's a surreal experience.❤️"

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Fan

"I like this story so far would like to read more."

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Guardian

"This is an amazing story. It really hooks you in. The characters are relatable. Love the whole plot. Can't wait for the next update! "

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deep feelings

"this story is incredible each and everything is explained in such a beautiful manners feelings are deeply expressed and written in such a way that reader gets absorbed anxiously waiting for the next chapter"

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Damn

"This had me by the throat"

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Guardian is a truly unique

" I have truly enjoyed this story so far. Easy to get into from the start. Author shows A LOT of promise. Can't wait for next book"

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Guardian

"I chose a 5 star rating because, unlike a lot of reads, I never found myself wanting to skip over boring, irrelevant, or unnecessary descriptions that were only added to fill space. The Guardian has a different approach to it than most fantasy/supernatural reads. "

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Great

"The book is very nice. I like the idea and concept behind it."

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WOW

"I haven't completed this yet but I'm close. I rarely get hooked into reading something, but this definitely caught my attention. I love this, the story, the characters, the descriptions! Looking forward to more!"

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Enjoyable

"Plot line is intriguing and author's writing style is engaging. Some aspects of the plot seem cliché but overall it is still creative. Enjoying the story a lit!"

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Guardian

"Good beginning. Work into the background of her past. Much potential for a good adventure maybe a little romance. Overall good and different read . Don’t stop now many ways to go with this story."

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It's a good read wish it was longer

"I liked the two main characters The plot was well thought out I was washing it was a bit longer Grammaticaly there were very few mistakes Well done! "

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