Inkitt
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Amazing

"Absolutely amazing, very inspirational"

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mak zukerborg

"this is fucking SENDING MEEEEEEEEE i can't breathe i'm laughing so hard"

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It's a start

"I found this very interesting, a man who was considered a loser making such an impact on the world (a bad impact, but an impact nonetheless). I think that it is a good representation of cause and effect. I like the idea of it. The writing itself was a little difficult to understand, but I'm glad that you're trying. Everyone has a story (or many stories) to tell, and it takes courage to write it. So good job!"

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