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Just... wow

"I was waiting for a happy ending but then... PLOT TWIST! I'd like so much to see a continuation of this! Like... what awaits for him in phase two? Who are the people manipulating everything? I NEED ANSWERS! ~getting frustratred for how quickly this ended~ Anyway... great job, seriously!"

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