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Erotic

"Erotic. Comes alive in your mind"

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A lone desire

"Short yet wild and promising... Love the characters, i must say its a cliff hanger of what happened next after this adventurous first dat Please keep us updated with their story... Thank you for sharing your talent dear author."

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Fun

"Really enjoying the story so far.🤔🤔🤔😘💕"

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Misd

"Surprising events"

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Great

"Great read"

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Nice

"Nice nice nice nice"

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Nice

"Nice story.. I enjoyed reading it"

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Alone desire

"Loved eveything about the book,the writing was good everyone should def read it,personally l love short stories but would read the novel for this book 🧡"

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A lone desire

"What a cliffhanger, I need more!"

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It is quite a novel and really interesting

"I loved the way this was written, the words used and the feelings expressed. Although it's just 4 chapters rn I'm hooked! recommend reading it"

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The Lustrous virgin

"They were all sexually satiated "

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This story is sweet.

"I like this story."

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Too sexy

"A ridiculous story to read...haha "

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What I like about this book

"Grey, good, sex, fingers, vibrator, husband, red, panties, dripping, folds, opened, moans, blue, eyes, window,moist, cool, breeze, heat, bud"

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Neighbors

"Great short read"

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A lone desire

"I really want to read the whole story How they love turn out to be "

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Sugarlady

"Great plot for the story. Love the characters and the story is very romantic. The sex is excellent as well. Definitely needs edited though. Some words missing in some sentences and the grammar isn't pressed well in others. But great story"

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