This is really great!

"I loved this short story, and I wasn't sure how you were going to be able to wrap it up in the end in a satisfying way...but you did! I loved how deeply you delved into the characters and their situations. I was immediately attached to all of them. The element of dark humor in it was extremely well done. I'm totally nitpicking to find areas that need improved. I would have liked a description as to what the Undead looked like. I mean, everyone can kind of guess, but I wanted a little more. Also, I found it strange that Zac was able to crawl "on hands and knees" through his little hidey-hole. I expected him to have to drag himself. But maybe that's just me. Anyway, good work! I enjoyed this a lot!"