What is your opinion?
Abnormal Cataclysm
"This was a very interesting story line, although the author did not go far enough in explaining the war and why some received special powers and some didn't. I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more of this author's writing."
Rina's Review!
"This is great! Maybe it could just be a little more specific. One of the keys to great writing is describing things in detail. I think you're off to a great start. I wish you much luck."
Wonderful!
"I read the prologue, and I enjoyed it a lot. It drew me in, and I can't wait to read more. The plot itself was interesting, and I found myself very attached to your main character with his calm attitude and determination. I think it has a lot of potential, but I noticed a few things that may (and this is just my opinion) be holding it back. 1. I wasn't satisfied with the war just...happening. I think that something that big and devastating should have a clear beginning point. Maybe you will include this later, but from what I could tell, it looked like it was just going to be left that way. And I was curious about why people started getting powers. Was it the result of nuclear weapons? Chemical weapons? Something totally different? Again, this might be answered later, but I feel like the absence of these answers left the prologue a little holey. 2. There were some grammatical issues here and there, but it was very minor. I loved the writing style that you used in this story. 3. I wasn't sure how I felt about you switching between first and third person three times in the chapter. It works, but I think that it would read clearer if it was one or the other. This was a really great start. You have me excited to know what happens next. I really hope that this helps. Good work!"
