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Love want more

"Can't wait for more"

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❤❤❤❤❤❤

"Love the story very much and I wished it was more to it But thank you for a Beautiful Story. "

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Shipwrecked and Stranded

"Really enjoyed the book. Too bad it wasn't her family lost on the island."

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wrecked ship

"very good story, i love reading it all thru. awesome.tq"

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Love

"I couldn’t put this story down. I loved it "

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Ship wrecked

"Enjoyed reading this 3 part mini story. "

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Lost

"The story has great potential, unfortunately the author forgot the reason for the female lead nickname. She went from hiding her body because she was fat and thought she still was. Her nickname was tent because of her size. Then she's marooned on an island. She takes off her coat and she's anorexic.I mean that ruins the rest of the story for me. I'm not very forgiving when an author messes up. The reason for that is I'm reading a great story and all of a sudden something is completely different from what was said before. It's the same when writers don't research. For instance I read a book that had the two lead characters running from a fire. The woman trips over a dead deer. The writer describes the deer as innocent looking with eyes gently closed in death. That was when I threw the book over my shoulder. A little research would tell you if a deer has its eyes closed you better tiptoe away or get beat with its hooves. Animals and people have eyes open in death. So anyway, a good story can be ruined with just one mistake "

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