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What is your opinion?

Can't complain, it's a job-well-done

" I love the plot! It's interesting and pulls you in. It's a bit cliché at times and a bit repetitive, and although it's a piece of fiction, it has the consistency of early 2000's fan fiction- that's at least how I feel about it. Overall I give 9/10! Would recomend to my friends."

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Amazing

"This book is absolutely amazing I love it I have already told a bunch of my friends about it and Can't wait more"

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Great book

"Please don’t stop this 🙏🏻"

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The sailor love

"Love this story "

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Can't wait to read more!

"Love love love! Please continue the story! "

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Can’t wait to read more

"Love love love! "

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Plot Twist

"Enjoyed the great story-telling. The story flowed and had great humor. Not to happy with a bit of cultural misappropriation, I think anyway, but still a great story."

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Great job! Pls continue!

"I really like the storyline so far! Please update this story because I would love to see where this goes! This is the first time I've read a story like this and it's interesting."

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