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So sad

"So so sad. Will there be a follow on ?? "

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A heart can only take this much

"lovely small story but just the grammar thank u"

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The heart can only take this much

"I'm not sure why you ended it great story really was hoping there was more like she become a member of the secret service or something did have a tear but the ending I'm not happy terrible way to end such a great start"

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