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tododeku

"This story was... no words can describe it, it was that good. I never thought that I would enjoy this type of story before, but I love it. The writing style was just amazing, i did find a couple grammar mistakes, but no biggie, it just shows that this story came with no editing, it was all pure from the heart. I hope to find more stories like this! The relationship is just so good, i luv the love triangle between deku, kacchan, and shoto. I also hope to write on this! This book has inspired me to pursue this, I hope to have versions for what certain readers prefer. Thank you so much Alexis for letting me read this! "

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I LOVE IT

"Plz never stop writing!"

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Overall it's just amazing except for the fact that todoroki is a bit confusing in this story and their relationship didn't progress much

"It's a great story but there should be improvement in storyline and character "

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Appreciation And Commission Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."

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His personal hero (tododeku)

"I liked the book because it's a fan based story.It had a good plot,Good character development and just enough explicit content to make it juicy. 10/10"

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:)

"i love it and im not even half way into it it is so good"

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Love this story!!!

"I really love the plot and how well they displayed everything and how everything was said"

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Almost perfect 🥰

"I liked it and I would recommend it to others."

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Tododeku

"I love every single word of your story, I really do "

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It’s so awesome

"I’m so pulled towards this book it’s super exciting and ugh just so enjoyable"

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this is amazing

"amazing amazing amazing amazing ig"

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It's amazing! (Personal hero)

"I love it! This story is amazing! I've read it so many times! I hope to see you possibly update it further in the future with more story and even more flirting because that's just down right hot and cute at the same time haha "

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His Personal Hero (Todo Deku) REALLY GOOD!!!

"this was soooooo good, I loved it so much, it had the perfect balance between fluff and spice."

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good story

"this story is so good the plot is amazing this story had me sad and happy the authors writing style is amazing she explains everything s0 good"

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Amazing!

"I am a HUGE Todo×Deku Shipper and I spent weeks trying to find a good FanFic about them amd this is just awesome! The story line is awesome and the detail is...perfect. Lots of love💞💞✌✌"

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TODODEKU IS HAWT

"WELL DONE I'm so happy with this story so far please continue it's super good and awesome!"

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His perosnal hero

"Oh My God!!! I could never stop laughing. I am soo hooked on this!! ~Love Deka❤❤❤❤~"

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Oh My God!

"OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! You had me laughing so hard I couldn't breathe and crying at some points. You are such a great writer, I wish I could write as well as you do. I've been obsessed with BNHA for a little over a year and a half, I am a multi-shipper and love reading people's stories, yours has been the one that has touched me the most. Thank you so much for writing that story! You should continue it or start a new one! ~Love ~Alyra~"

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his personal hero

"i am truly addicted to this story!!!!! the reason i gave the plot 4 stars though is because i am just a weirdo who's obsessed with villainy, kidnapping, and most of all torchure...... you are a amazing author i love your stories!!"

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His Personal Hero

"I love this story! I find myself re-reading it all the time!I'm really glad I found this story, I'm beyond addicted to it! I really hope you write more chapters soon, but its perfectly fine if you just want to leave the story there OwO. <3"

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