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Good

"Like the pics, I think favorite is Bee"

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Book

"Like the book can not wait for the next chapter. Like the book can not wait for the next chapter. "

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Beezus

"Love the story hurry an update please:)"

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becoming beeszu

"love the way the book is going i hope she turns out to be the best fighters.in the group . the book keeps you thinking what will happen next .hope she falls in love with alpha "

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Good

"Good book so far "

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Xjsjdjckfie

"Poor beezus i feel for her "

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becoming beezus begining

"these first chapters where amazing despite the grammar mistakes. the plot is very interesting so far really curious to where the story will go. keep up the good work and hope you can upadate soon."

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The lonely wolf

"Simple and loving the flow of the story."

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Becoming Beezus

"Love the story! I'll be waiting for the next chapters ahead đź’›"

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Good

"Good book interesting and intriguing. You can tell it’s a rough draft so it needs to be gone over but the story is good. "

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Review

"Can’t wait to see how poor Bee makes out "

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Excited to see where this leads

"I really like this story. It's quite refreshing. The motivations behind each of the characters are quite clear. The main characters are grounded in reality (even though they're werewolves) and the writing style is great. There are a few grammatical errors and sudden switches between first and third person which can easily be fixed. Other than that, three of the characters are Aaron, Austin and Aiden. Three names which are quite similar so that threw me off a bit...but that could just be me. I'm looking forward to future updates and I'm sure it's going to be great!"

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Becoming Beezus

"I love how you wove the story. Slowly easing from dislike, to developing feelings for each other, and then easing into love. I would love to see the King find just Mate, in a spin off maybe. Great story,Love it."

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Storyline

"Few grammar errors but the story line is good"

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More please!

"Love to keep reading! It' a greats story :) Waiting for the next chapters!"

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Becoming beezulas

"Good reading love werewolfs"

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Great

"Great story plot cant wait for more updates."

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Beezus

"Love the story so far! When will you be updating?"

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Interesting story

"Enjoying it so far. Please update soon. I hate having to wait lol "

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